Each octave of “The Weeping Wish” expresses the speaker’s desire to transform her tears into something more powerful: comets to illuminate the night; flowers which would make her famous; medicine for her friends. She also wishes that the sighs accompanying those tears might reach God. In her tearful seeking of such connections with God, posterity, and friends, the speaker appears alone in a sadness which, by the poem’s end, appears life-threatening.
The poem’s preoccupation with how tears might “turn”—the root of “verse”—into something more links to its self-reflexive concern with the speaker’s “story,” in which her sighs might be identified with poems like this one (since her emblems are figured, a few pages later, as the “sighs of a sad soul”). Similarly, her imagined tear-formed flowers would have been recognizable to her readers as both poetic and medicinal. It seems possible, then, that a poem that first seems hopelessly ambitious in its desire not only to brighten the speaker’s dark mood but speak to God, immortalize her memory, and remedy her friends, might actually (if figuratively) accomplish many if not all of its aims.
— Leah Knight and Wendy Wall