Editorial note
The aim of the elemental edition is to make the poems accessible to the largest variety of readers,
which involves modernizing spelling and punctuation as well as adding basic glosses. Spelling and
punctuation reflect current standard American usage; punctuation highlights syntax which might
otherwise be obscure. Outmoded but still familiar word forms (“thou,” “‘tis,” “hold’st”) are not
modernized, and we do not modernize grammar when the sense remains legible. After a brief headnote
aimed at offering a “way in” to the poem’s unique qualities and connections with other verse by
Pulter or her contemporaries, the edition features a minimum of notes and interpretative framing to
allow more immediate engagement with the poem. Glosses clarify synonyms or showcase various
possible meanings in Pulter’s time. Other notes identify named people and places or clarify obscure
material. We rely (without citation) primarily on the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the Oxford
Reference database, and the King James Version (KJV) of the Bible. When we rely on Alice Eardley’s
edition of Pulter’s work, we cite her text generally (“Eardley”); other sources are cited in full. The
result is an edition we consider a springboard for further work on Pulter’s poetry.
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Headnote
Servile vassal or heavenly monarch? The decision is God’s, the speaker states, in this poem that formally toys with creating and dissolving constraints. Pulter’s complaint about her spiritual abjection is described conventionally, as she confesses to being mere dust bound to a world of sin and pain. But the political vocabulary that she offers in muted form in Poem 20 (a verse in which the speaker similarly implores God for a heavenly crown) appears more overtly here. Unenfranchised, unfree, and in servitude, the speaker professes her readiness to “reign” with God in heaven. As in Poem 20, she offers the only gift to God that she feels she has at her disposal: the power to create songs of praise, which, in eternity, might take some new and unknown form. This is one of Pulter’s most intricate and experimental poems formally: one of only five in tercets, it uses rhyme to yoke stanzas into four pairs, each stanza concluding with a short dimeter line that visually stages contraction and deterioration on the page. This complex structure is offset, however, by extensive enjambment, which creates a breathless rush and a proliferation of clauses that refuses expected separations and terminations.Line number 1
Critical note
downcast, lowered in estate, condition, or character; abased, humbled. This poem has an unusual rhyme scheme and meter: eight stanzas of three lines, the first two in iambic tetrameter, the third in dimeter. The rhyme scheme, aabccb, creates a pairing of stanzas.Line number 2
Gloss note
move in an unsteady manner; rotate, turn, or pivot around; also, to trust in GodLine number 6
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so thatLine number 7
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abandonedLine number 8
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song of divine praiseLine number 10
Critical note
elemental physical matter. See Genesis 3:19: “In the sweat of thy face shalt thou eat bread, till thou return unto the ground; for out of it wast thou taken: for dust thou [art], and unto dust shalt thou return.”Line number 12
Critical note
reward, empower (with both political and religious meanings). See 1 Peter 5:4: “And when the chief Shepherd shall appear, ye shall receive a crown of glory that fadeth not away.”Line number 13
Gloss note
grant graciously or condescendinglyLine number 13
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to set free; release from debt of confinement (a meaning activated in the next line’s reference to “vassal”); invest with rights; admit to membership, with privilegesLine number 14
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feudal slave; abject personLine number 16
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eagerlyLine number 17
Physical note
or “very”; in the manuscript, “very” is altered to “wery”Line number 20
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entangled, envelopedLine number 24
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