Breath and Song
by Sarah C. E. Ross
The image of breath is key to the poem, the soul on earth “breathing forth” her spiritual songs until death. The penultimate stanza, with its denial of death, may owe something to the opening stanza of John Donne’s “A Valediction Forbidding Mourning”:
John Donne
A Valediction Forbidding Mourning
A Valediction Forbidding Mourning
- AS virtuous men pass mildly away,
- And whisper to their souls to go,
- Whilst some of their sad friends do say,
- “Now his breath goes,” and some say, “No.”
- So let us melt, and make no noise,
- No tear-floods, nor sigh-tempests move;
- ’Twere profanation of our joys
- To tell the laity our love.
- Moving of th’ earth brings harms and fears;
- Men reckon what it did, and meant;
- But trepidation of the spheres,
- Though greater far, is innocent.
- Dull sublunary lovers’ love
- —Whose soul is sense—cannot admit
- Of absence, ’cause it doth remove
- The thing which elemented it.
- But we by a love so much refined,
- That ourselves know not what it is,
- Inter-assurèd of the mind,
- Care less, eyes, lips and hands to miss.
- Our two souls therefore, which are one,
- Though I must go, endure not yet
- A breach, but an expansion,
- Like gold to aery thinness beat.
- If they be two, they are two so
- As stiff twin compasses are two;
- Thy soul, the fix’d foot, makes no show
- To move, but doth, if th’ other do.
- And though it in the centre sit,
- Yet, when the other far doth roam,
- It leans, and hearkens after it,
- And grows erect, as that comes home.
- Such wilt thou be to me, who must,
- Like th’ other foot, obliquely run;
- Thy firmness makes my circle just,
- And makes me end where I begun.
John Donne, “A Valediction Forbidding Mourning”, via Luminarium.org
The image of the poem itself as “breathed forth” governs many of Pulter’s devotional lyrics, and is captured in the titles she gives to the sequences of poems in her manuscript: “Poems Breathed Forth by the Noble Hadassah” and “The Sighs of a Sad Soul Emblematically Breathed Forth by the Noble Hadassah.”